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Whipping Girl Laura

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Seems that Kimmy has found herself a new pet to torment. It's surprising the things people request. While I am not against whipping a cute little bunny girl the idea came from Laura's creator DarkSonic250. I did however make a small story to go with the picture without her asking. Please comment on the picture. I except both good and bad comments.

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"Man it is hot today" Laura exclaim as she and Chuck walked across the country side. "Why are we out this way again?" Chuck looked to his female companion. "I already told you, it's a surprise." Laura sighed and kept following the fox. "If this surprise doesn't show up soon then I'm going home." "We're almost there, in fact there it is." Chuck point to a bunch of trees in the distance. Laura couldn't see what the big deal was at first but then she saw it. Just above the trees was what looked like the tower of an old castle. "I found this yesterday and thought that it might be worth checking out. There might be something valuable inside if we're lucky. If not then maybe we could spruce it up and make into a little hideout." Laura wasn't so sure this was a good idea. "What if somebody already lives their Chuck. I bet they won't like us snooping around." Chuck just laughed. "I'm sure no one lives all the way out here and even if someone does then we'll just explain to them that we were just checking out the place to see if it's empty. We might even be able to get a free meal if that happens." Laura was still unsure, but she had to admit she was feeling hungry at the moment.

As they approached the castle they were a bit surprised to see how intact the castle was despite the apparent age of it. The dark stone walls seemed to be in perfect condition and there was nary a shingle lose on it. "Hmm... maybe someone does live here." said Chuck as he opened the castle gate. "But it's strange, if someone lived in a place like this you would think that there would be servants around." Laura looked around the courtyard and spotted a small garden shack at the far side of it. "Let's check in there. We might find the grounds keeper." They walked over to the shack and opened it, finding a bunch of tools inside. "Guess it was just a storage shed." Chuck said as Laura walked in. "Yeah but all the tools are dusty. Doesn't seem like anyone had touched them in years." "Then there is only one thing to do." "What's that?" "I'm going to go inside and see if anyone is home. You stay outside and wait for me. If I find someone I'll come and get you. If not I'll make sure it is safe to explore." The purple rabbit nodded to him. "Just be careful."

Chuck left to head and side and Laura followed him out of the shack. As she exited she spotted a lovely flower garden. "I'll wait back here. I want to take a look at the flowers." Chuck looked back to her." Okay then, I'll be back soon." Laura walked into the garden and looked at the many different flowers. Tulips, daisies, violets, orchids, snap dragons and roses grew within it. "They are so lovely. I hope that I can take some home with me." As she stepped into the center of the garden she saw another rose bush, but this one was different. The roses on it were black and the bush was covering a statue of a young mobian hedgehog girl. She thought that the girl depicted in the statue looked familiar, but she couldn't quite put her finger on it. "These roses are so beautiful." She said bitting her lip in an attempt to distract her from the idea on picking them, but her want of the flowers overlapped her better judgment. She went to the bush and picked three of them. "I can't wait to show Chuck these when he gets back." As soon as she finished saying that a rag went over her mouth and nose as a hand pressed it against her face from behind. She didn't even have time to scream before passing out from the chloroform on the piece of cloth.

"Wakey, wakey my little bunny." Laura heard as she became conscious again. Everything was fuzzy at first but she could soon make out the white cat girl with black hair standing in front of you. "You and your fox friend are in a lot of trouble." As Laura tried to yell out she found that her words only came out as muffled noises. "Ah, ah, ah. No talking till your mistress allows you to speak. That is why I put a gag on you." Laura feeling finally came back and she could now tell that a ball gag had been placed into her mouth making it impossible for her to speak. She could also feel that all of her clothing had been removed except her bra and panties and that a leather collar had been placed around her neck. Looking around she found herself in some sort of dungeon and that her arms were shackled to two large wooden poles so that she was forced to stand with her arms spread apart. "Now then, I believe that your name is Laura right? Is that right? That is what your fox friend told me when I asked him what your name was." Laura nodded and became worried about what had happened to Chuck. "Well Laura, you and your friend have been very bad. You both trespassed onto my property and you even went so far as to pick my black roses from my garden. I can't stress enough how hard it is to grow those." Laura's ears lowered as she listened to the lecture. She did feel bad for what she did. "Now if you promise not to scream I'll remove you gag. Understand?" She nodded and the cat girl did as she said she would.

"Who are you and what did you do to Chuck?" Laura said to the cat as her gag was removed. "Chuck?" The cat girl looked confused for a moment. "Oh, the fox. I stuffed him into a box and locked it. I am much more interested in you than him at the moment. As for the other question I am Kimmy, but you may call me mistress." Laura was a bit appalled at the Kimmy's statement. "Why would I call you that?" Kimmy smiled. "Cause if you don't I'll reduce your mind to that of an animal." Laura's eyes widened. "H-how would you do that?" "The collar around your neck has several powers. With it I can control your mind, send electric shocks through your body, tighten it to choke you or a number of other things I won't mention right now. Now I am willing to let you keep your mind at the moment, but only if you are compliant." Laura gulped. "Please let me and Chuck go miss. We didn't mean any harm. If you let us go I promise we won't come back." "Sorry, I could do that but I don't want too. I have to punish the both of you and besides..." Kimmy came close to Laura and ran her fingers up the rabbit's body which caused Laura to shiver in reaction. "Your just too cute to let go of." Kimmy then planted a kiss on Laura's lips and Laura blushes bright red as the cat breaks away.

"From now on you are going to live here and serve me as a slave, being my maid when I wish and a pet when I am feeling bored. As part of this you will be brought down to the dungeons twice a week for punishment for picking my roses. You friend will have to serve me as well, but i will forgo punishment for him as long as you both obey me. If you don't agree to these terms then I will just do to you what I did to the last girl who trespassed here and turn you into a statue." Laura then remembered the hedgehog girl in the garden and realized that must be who she was talking about. "You can do that?!?!" Kimmy grinned evilly. "It is one of the powers of your collar.What do you say slave?" Laura knew there was no real choice. She hung her head in shame. "I except your terms mistress." "Good girl, then let us begin with your first punishment." Kimmy went behind Laura, out of view of the rabbit. Laura waited for what was to come as she heard Kimmy looking through something behind her.

For a moment the noise stopped and Laura settled down a little until she felt a sting on her back and the unmistakable crack of a whip. Laura cried out in pain. "That's right let it all out my little slave. Let your mistress hear your pain." The whip cracked against Laura's back again and this time she couldn't help but to scream. "Ten lashes for today Laura. then twenty for each of your future sessions." Another lash went against the rabbit girl's flesh and she could feel her knees wanting to give in, but as she was she couldn't give her body such relief. "That is unless I get bored and com up with something better." Another two lashes came in a row and tears were now pouring from Laura's eyes. "Please mistress! This is too much for my first time! Forgive me! I beg of you!" A lash to her butt was her only reply and Laura knew there was no getting out of this until her punishment was up. "You sadist! How can you do this!" The sound of another hit cracked as it struck right below her tail this time. Laura was now crying audibly and was squirming in place, the realization that there was no escape had left her frightened mind.Kimmy on the other hand was enjoying herself. She smiled as she looked on with unfeeling eyes at the suffering rabbit. Laura belonged to her now and suffering was to become part of her new life. She sent two strokes to the top part of her back and Laura screamed out one more time before going limp. "What a shame, passed out after just nine strokes. It will only get harder for her from here." Kimmy dropped the whip to the floor and went to look at her unconscious slave girl. "I'm sure you'll learn to bare it though Laura and in time become a perfect servant to me." She tilted Laura's head up to her and kissed her softly on the lips one more time before leaving the room to go and convince Chuck to give into her will as well.
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Feb 14, 2010, 2:38:22 AM
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featherblade2008's avatar
Very nice art and story.
I like it alot!