Laura hypno maid

A picture of Laura and Kimmy. I am really not happy about how this came out. From the very beginning I was having problems. Kimmy's body looks to small and her head too big. I still can't draw hands right. I couldn't figure out how to make her look like she was sitting properly. Laura's legs look a bit off. Actually I think I did pretty good on Laura except the I wish I added more design to her dress. I'll do better on the next picture though. BTW, the background is pink because I was going to add something like "Be my mind slave.... I mean valentine" to the picture but that holiday has passed and I am to frustrated with this picture to care. Laura belongs to DarkSonic250. Please give your comments.